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  1. gerry boydApril 6, 2010 at 9:52 AM

    Very interesting structure and language in this one Rusty. I like this quite a bit. The poem said read me and read me again because there's something there. And there is. I dig the long melodious lines and the suggestive nature of the actual narrative, saying so much by hinting rather than actually saying. Bravo!

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