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It'll disappear in a few days, but it's the first one in a while, so I thought I'd post it. I'll slowly be working on poems every day this month.



*poof*
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  1. Richard CooperNovember 1, 2010 at 11:51 PM

    Lots of great lines, Rusty, I especially liked "...600 years off the bow..." and "...the delicatessen in the waves..."

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  2. Shel ComptonNovember 3, 2010 at 8:52 AM

    This works. Big time. That image of the fired cannon and how it applies to this overall. And the word choices and how each builds to the next. His holy crown. Primordial like first sex. This wins, Rusty.

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  3. RustyNovember 3, 2010 at 3:26 PM

    Thanks gentlemen.

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