It'll disappear in a few days, but it's the first one in a while, so I thought I'd post it. I'll slowly be working on poems every day this month.
*poof*
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Paul Ilechko
Blood Blossoms What kind of blooms are these which linger into early winter survive so many nights of freezing temperature still thriving in...
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Probably everyone knows this poem and this book very well. Kinnell isn't exactly invisible in the poetry world. I loved this poem and th... -
Line by line retranslation of Ashbery Waiting makes time democratic, you just said so Then a white horse ran by, repeatedly running back a... -
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Lots of great lines, Rusty, I especially liked "...600 years off the bow..." and "...the delicatessen in the waves..."
ReplyDeleteThis works. Big time. That image of the fired cannon and how it applies to this overall. And the word choices and how each builds to the next. His holy crown. Primordial like first sex. This wins, Rusty.
ReplyDeleteThanks gentlemen.
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